Monday, December 2, 2013

TP #2 Dana

      This tutoring session, I worked with Jee-young. We have been working with one another for a couple of months now, focusing mainly on perfecting her writing. During this particular session we, like we do each week, covered a few chapters within her South Korean English book written by Ah-young. 
     Instead of having Jee-young read each chapter thoroughly, we skip anything written in Korean and jump right into the English activities. This allows her to figure out through context clues and comparison what each chapter is covering. If she doesn’t understand a certain portion of the activity, we go over the section together. I ask comprehension questions as well as use forms of scaffolding to lead her to the answer. Most of the time she only needs a little push in the right direction in order to correct her errors.
       After we covered a few chapters successfully, Jee-young brought out the application she was working on for an internship with a hospice in Tallahassee. Her friends as well as the career center had already reviewed it. However, I was there to aid Jee-young in perfecting the application. It was due the next day.

       I pulled her grammar and sentence structures apart, flipping the word order, sentence position, and punctuation.  With each correction, I asked Jee-young why I was fixing sentences in each way and explained my reasoning if she didn’t understand. It was as if I had opened up a new world of writing to her. By the end of the editing, I barely had to make the corrections. Jee-young was fixing the mistakes on her own, therefore creating a concise and professional application.

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